Yanni1995

Dear Whoever, Mia signed me up for counseling at the school. She tells me it’s for my own good, and for my mental health, but I think it’s just because ...

It's a very good poem and I don't really have anything bad to say to it. You're a brilliant writer! Happy writing!

Winding roads lined with trees glare at me as I drive. I wish their branches would reach out and grab me, drag me away from my destination. But they don't. ...

This was a really heartfelt piece. I love the way you wrote it but now to point out your mistakes. Silent tears fell from my eyes, dripping down onto my ...

I can't hack this water straight off my back, Take what you say and try to act, Rhutheless and shameless, no more talkin' back, - ruthless Smile in undesputed cover ...

Stupid feelings - I think you should put an exclamation point or a period just to prove that you're trying to make a point. I have stupid feelings That come ...

I love it! Simply because it says everything that a teen that parents want to say to their teen children. Happy Birthday, my child! You’re now officially a teen. And ...

So, this looks like it was written out of boredom. Anyway, let's get on with it. His little legs go swish swish swish as he tries to stay afloat, I ...

This is a very good piece. It was well written but the rhyming scheme is really off. In my opinion you should try to write poems that give a specific ...

I loved it. The story is awesome but I have one thing to point out. Lose of a family member or job? - this should be loss for the past ...

I love love love it!! it's so emotional and your words really stung. i really really hope that i'm not the one you're talking to because i would just day ...

I love the story behind it. but i have a few things to point out. Some where there’s always a desire hidden - 'somewhere' should be one word A wish ...

I love it!! It's very emotional and expresses a lot of things in just one work. It's lovely. Keep it up!

Chapter 6 The next Monday that followed I was surprised to find Troy outside my house so early in the morning. He was in his car when my sisters and ...

I think I will actually turn it into a novel. I have some ideas right now. You really think it will be good?