Yanni1995

Well, let me tell you that I absolutely loved this poem. It has a lot of meaning and emotion even though some of your words are blunt and straight-to-the-point. I ...

Doxie, this is a really good poem. I like the meaning of it but I do have a few nitpicks to point out. That you are who you are Born ...

Chapter 7 I woke up the next morning to an empty room. The spot next to me was still warm. I panicked. ‘I was so stupid!’ I thought to myself. ...

This is a very original poem and it was kind of disappointing that there weren't any punctuations at all but I get that was what you wanted to do. Anyway, ...

Save me I’m falling , Falling so deep into chaos , Guided by the hands of your heavy lies . Will I be lost forever in this moment? Screaming for ...

Pretty good poem. Just something about the punctuations to help make the flow smoother and so that the lines don't run into each other. You said life is too short, ...

I break away from the monotony of apathy this moment of eradication of my feelings takes dedication; a hopeless mission to transition to a nation of empathy to dream of ...

This is an awesome poem. I love the content and everything it meant but there is kinda no flow. You should use punctuations and then be careful with the words ...

Beautiful poem but you should put punctuations or else all the lines will just run into each other. Running out of oxygen inside a hospital room , The fear of ...

Why is it so hard to imagine something harder; a life where it's not a given, not something free. I want to feel the heated passion of the spirit burning ...

Am I everything you place me to be? Am I beautiful, amazing, kind, caring? How can you think I'm so great? You all place me on this pedestal. Praising me, ...

Really witty but true nonetheless. I no longer watch T.V or pig out on boredom food . I write. - I love this stanza because it speaks to me. With ...

A nice poem albeit creepy but I think it did the trick. I hope your stalker is reading this so he knows what's gonna happen to him. Anyway, bits and ...

Grass is prickling at my feet, my thoughts are restless in the heat. I want to be the rushing creek, without a care of what I seek... - I love ...

I like the meaning behind the piece although getting to the grammatical parts of it the whole thing doesn't really make sense. The structure is well, actually there isn't any. ...