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Re: Drugs
This is a really great poem. I didn't find many mistakes but I would like to point out those that I did. Alcohol is the nectar of the gods. Well, ...
May 26, 2011 -
Re: The Letters Chapter Three
Another job well done. However, mistakes, I've found them again. Anyway, I think some, or most I don't really know, are made due to carelessness. But then again, that's why ...
May 25, 2011 -
Re: untitled (edited)
Awesome poem. Now, I would like to correct the mistakes. I know your afraid , -comma for pause and dramatic effect. I see you. Curled up behind that mask , ...
May 25, 2011 -
Re: You will always have me.
Beautiful poem. Now, I'm here to correct mistakes. I was only a young girl When you where taken to hospital - 'where' is pointing to a place, you mean 'were' ...
May 25, 2011 -
Re: I Don't Wanna Wear My Pants Anymore!
This is so hilarious! Just one question: do you really feel like that or is just boredom at its best, or worst, whichever the case? Anyway, I loved it. It's ...
May 21, 2011 -
Re: 'Til Death Do Us Part
Chapter 9 I walked out of the room and found Ralph pacing back and forth, shooting worried glances at the door once in a while. He rushed to me when ...
May 21, 2011 -
Re: Family Matters
This is a really humorous poem. I love that everything in this poem is pertaining for me. The meaning of this poem is really funny although I could find some ...
May 19, 2011 -
Re: Deleted for Family, again
Yo Soulkana! This is an absolutely wonderful poem. It's so beautiful although I feel that sometimes you used to many commas in the stanza, but that is just an opinion. ...
May 19, 2011 -
Re: One thing
Wow! This was so freaky! The way you described everything in it was just so, scary. I swear I was frightened. Anyway, loved it. Hope you write something more. Happy ...
May 19, 2011 -
Re: Romeo & Juliet: Instant Messaging Edition
This is so awesome!!! I swear i loved it. Absolutely amazing work. It was soooooooooooooooo funny as well, the way everything happened. I especially loved Benvolio's and Mercutio's scenes especially ...
May 17, 2011 -
Re: 'Til death do us part
Chapter 8 The next morning I woke up next to Troy. He was snoring lightly, his face peaceful, his lips turned up into a smile. I carefully got out of ...
May 15, 2011 -
Re: It's okay to cry
Wow! This is a really short piece but it's beautifully written. I love it! Happy writing!
May 15, 2011 -
Re: She Knows Him
This is so cute! I love the way things went and the way you described both him and her. Keep writing, Happy writing!
May 15, 2011 -
Re: Fragile
Wow! It's really short yet meaningful. I loved it! hahaha
May 8, 2011 -
Re: Sweet Lady Jane
This is a charming story. I absolutely love the plot but I do have some things to point out. But first, I need to ask: Is English your first language? ...
May 8, 2011