Yanni1995

It was supposed to be a camping trip. For two weeks we were supposed to be camping, having fun with friends, away from parents with only a teacher to watch ...

First off, I would like to commend you on a job well done. This is a really emotional poem and I can feel everything that you're trying to convey; there's ...

Doxie!!! I swear you have a talent for writing poems. I absolutely adore this one. I just hope she can read this so that she knows there are people who ...

First off, I'd like to say that this is a cute poem. I really love the story behind it. Secondly, I'd like to say that the form of your poem ...

Chapter 11 Troy still had me in his arms; he was still murmuring apologies to me and I realized that we both went through a lot of things while we ...

Absolutely loved it!! Seriously, I know what you mean. Great poem!

Well, this is just a part of a whole story that's why you can't understand it. You should read the first few chapters before this one otherwise you really will ...

Chapter 10 “I-I-I...” Marc trailed off not really knowing what to say. “Troy, please calm down.” I soothed. “Go to the other room and take Rose. I don’t want her ...

Wow! I mean, yeah, wow! This is a scarily accurate work. The title is definitely appropriate. I didn't really find anything that was wrong with it grammatically aside from a ...

First off, this is rather cute. Now, onto the comments. My name is pochahontas, -Pocahontas I sing every thing I say . I constantly have drug induced delusions. Like talking ...

Delilah had always liked Manhattan. She remembered her first time visiting in short bursts of clarity; blinding lights against the dark sky, illuminating the night; a rat, with squinty black ...

It had been four months. Four months since that fateful day and since her heart died. It had been sixteen weeks since she discovered she was pregnant and found out ...

My heart pounded in my chest as I hid in the hallway closet. I listened to the gunshots, the terrified screams of my friends and family and the commanding shouts ...

WOW!! you're absolutely right!! he is a genius... I absolutely loved it although I was a little disappointed by the lack of punctuations but this is just beautiful. I did ...

This is a beautiful poem. However, I did find some mistakes and would like to point them out. The night sky expands over the world below , Everywhere the stars ...