Yagaron

Your poem is very moving, but I couldn't see the main idea. Is there some central point?

I couldn't find anything to critique. It was very good.

I like it. especially the part about how H'e there forever

enjoy it I did. The simple expression of writer's block while writing something good to express it

I do the same. I usually read a book or listen to music just before bed time when everything begis to wind down. Unfortunately, that doesn't leave much time :D

Exactly how I feel. I get cramps a lot. It's @*&#! painful.

Ode to Burnt toast... fascinating :). hope to see more.

What do you mean post a "good" one later? all poetry is good. I've written stupider stuff. what matters is not how much sense it makes. Poetry is a way ...

curious...

I've never heard of an ode to a stale strudel. I found it quite amuing, though a little strange.

Nice job, Bubble! althought don't let penguin attack se your signature :D

I like it, Penguin! kepp up the good work ;)

IS this yours? great!

*clap clap clap clap* very nice