Yagaron

Hope Wall to wall, Trapped inside a cage! There you will find me. A captive of a thing called life! Seek me out. Tell me why. How can it be? ...

This is on of the best things I have ever read! I love it! Keep it up! I want to read more!

Love How happy I was, Before yon fair maiden came unto me! Her hair, the color of night, Her face, as a pale moon on Winter's night! How happy was ...

I can't sleep. I can't think. I don't know what to do. I sit playing Chess with myself. Why can't I sleep? Another piece captured. I am tired out of ...

on the first line, the i should be capitalized. Also, as for your question, I'd say that it was fairly well written.

I really can't critique this because it's self-expression. But I like it and feel the same way, except I'm a boy.

I like it, but it seems kind of random. Is there really any point?

I think these drawings are great. they's be even better if you added color.

I agree with the message, but it was kind of short. I liked the part about sharpening swords on rocks of pride.

I like it. The part about the net was a little confusing, though.

I liked it, but there seemed to be no real structure. I seemed kind of... all over the place. Perhaps you should try to focus on one point.

It's kind of random... but it does capture the "essence" of fire.

I like it, but... it kind of doesn't make any sense. Maybe it would have more meaning if you made it a little easier to understand.

I can definatly see that set to music. It was very moving. Although, if you work on it a bit, you could make it flow a little better.

These are great photos. You're no ameture. You have natural talent. The distored pictur of you and your frein... was that on of those weird mirrors?