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I'm really enjoying this. It's very nicely written and a pretty interesting plot. If you write more please let me know. I would love to read the rest if you ...

Again, I really like this. It's quite interesting. Your imagery and description is very good, painting a clear picture in my mind. A couple of your sentences were a bit ...

Okay, so it seems the whole grammar has been covered already so I'll skip that part for both of our sakes considering I don't know how much help I would ...

"Mike! We shouldn't be doing this!" I hiss at my brother. Mike falls back so he's right beside me. "You're not flaking out on me are you, little sister ." ...

Wow this is good for an 8-10 year old. It actually was written quite well. If you write anymore let me know. Great job

Very good so far. I would eally enjoy reading more. It's a bit cliche but I think you make it work very well and give it your own style, If ...

I really enjoyed reading this. I don't think I found any SPaG errors so you should be good on that. The imagery and description in this is beautifully written. It's ...

"The police are in their way here to check everything out. Depending on the outcome of the investigation we may or may not be sending you home on buses. Until ...

I didn't see anything wrong. It's ver good, I enjoy reading these blog posts/chapters. Good job. Please let me know when you put more up.

I'm officially hooked. I really like this, I hope you continue. Good job, and don't ever let anyone discourage you :)

This verrrryyyyy creative. I don't think anyone else would have thought of this. I like the humor and how she gets side tracked so easily. It actually seems pretty realistic. ...

This is a lot better then the prologue. It's pretty interesting so far, I hope you continue. Please let me know if and when you write more.

I like this but it's not too terribly great. I would put it a bit of a twist to it since there's so many others like this. I don't know, ...

Present Day, Ninth Grade: "Oh my God, Mrs. Greene is going in for surgery we're going to have a sub for the whole month!" Leah exclaims excitedly. I smile and ...

Another fantastic chapter! I'm really enjoying this story. I don't really have anything to suggest because it's super good already. I liked the imagery and how the words just seem ...