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Shattering soul splintering into tiny pieces I can't put it back together it's been mended too many times now I'm just a shell wandering through this world feeling numb no ...

Beautiful job, I really enjoyed this! The descriptions and wording were wonderfully done. Well done my dear, great job and good luck on your future writes.

I really enjoyed this, it describes exactly how I'm feeling at the moment. Anyways, I like the flow and the way everything sounds together. You did a beautiful job wording ...

I really liked this. It's beautifully written yet simple. I love the emotion that just seems to flow along with the words. Great job and good luck on your future ...

Some of this confused me a little but I'm still absolutely awe-struck. I really enjoyed this, the flow was great, the descriptions painted a clear and vivid picture in my ...

I'm a bit confused too but I, unlike the rest, enjoyed this. It has a nice flow and kind of captivates me. I don't know, maybe it's my dark side ...

I absolutely loved this! Amazing job my dear :) I can relate to some of this very easily and the description was beautifully done. All in all this is a ...

I like this, it's an interesting way to look at things. I enjoy seing other people's views on things like this, it really makes you understand all the different ways ...

I hide behind a fake smile dying inside hoping you'll see and finally come save me but still I'm alone wating for the shadows to consume me I hide behind ...

I'm a bit morbid so this interests me a lot more then it probably should. lol. But this was beautifully written, I loved how well everything just seemed to flow ...

I liked this one, it's nice and simple yet holds true emotion. It doesn't really have much imagery, which I usually look for in a good poem, but it's still ...

I won't lie, I'm a very morbid and dark person this intriguies me, like, alot. But, yes this was beautifully written with nice, strong imagery and descriptions. This poem is ...

I really liked this, it had nice imagery, wording and descriptions. It painted a clear and vivid picture in my mind so great job on that. Anyways, wonderful job and ...

Very unique and wonderful. I can relate to some of this stuff to so it kinda struck a chord in me. I write alot of self hate and suicide poems ...

I lay here upon my casket blood red rose upon my chest crimson pours from my cuts dripping down my arm puddling beneath my final resting place black silk dances ...