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I'm not going to post anymore of this unless I get comments because of right now it seems like no one likes because I've gotten no comments. The tiny children ...

I stand in the tiny examination room, the purple, grey, and blue curtain drawn around me. "Take off your close and put this on, Sam." Mrs. Manula instructs. She sticks ...

Oooh, so it was just a dream. Nice twist! I'm really enjoying this so far, it's intriguing and unique. Everything's great, I wouldn't change a thing, had this been my ...

So, I think this chapter was fantastic. The suspense corresponded with the mystery very well, making it intriguing. The length was very nice and the descriptions great. The only critique ...

Ti is very interresting. The mystery just kind of pulls you in, making you want to read more. The descriptions are good and the pace is just right. I can't ...

Very interesting and unique. My only thing is "wee gee board" should be "ouija board." Other then that and it being pretty short, this chapter was great. Great job and ...

Still totally in love with this!!!! I can't wait to read more, so please let me know if you write more. Just like every other chapter, I can't find any ...

Ooooh, I think I'm officially hooked :) anyways this is very very very interesting to say the least. I really love the way you've written this and the way the ...

I really liked this, it was descriptive, beautifully written, and set at a nice pace. I'm not good at the whole grammar thing so I usually just skip that part ...

This sounds really interesting, I can't wait to read more. I like that it's unique and unlike what everyone else always writes about. Also, I think it was very nicely ...

I actually enjoyed this, I think it's a pretty good pace and interesting concept. I can't wait to see where you take it. I do think some questions have been ...

I really, really enjoyed this. Like a lot. I hope you decide to continue writing this and post more soon. If you do, please let me know. I'd absolutely love ...

"Bye Sammie!" Summer calls from the front doors of Kingsley Elementary School, waving frantically. "Bye-bye Sammie!" Jake says, giving me a quick hug and kiss before following his sister. "Bye, ...

I am soooo looking forward to more :) But anyways, I'm not so great on the whole grammar thing myself, so if you don't mind I'll let someone else take ...

This was really interesting so far. It has a nice pace, great suspense, and your descriptions are breathtaking. I hope you continue with this, considering it's captured my attention (something ...