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I would create a draw back to using such a power. For instance she can't just wish away a bad situation, she simple redirects it to herself. In a sense ...

There is also another aspect you could look into. I have read a few books that each chapter is from a different character's POV. So you would have chapter 1 ...

My suggestion is create your 'Right' path first. All the way to the end and mark where each choice is. I am one of those, "use paper" programmers so I ...

Actually the reason that the other slave is with them is that Do'amha said he wouldn't leave without her and Karliah was present when she was raped so she is ...

Fair enough. This is for a fan-fiction (First I have ever written) for the Elder Scrolls game series. The master thief is a very likable and warm character by the ...

Technically there is an entire guild that knows about this "theft", but it sort of falls under the same thing as no one knowing where the group is in the ...

Here is the basic idea. A master thief helps a slave escape from a slaver under the guise of helping him after a horrific event. The true intention is that ...

The concept itself isn't cliché. I am going to start with that. Alternate realities isn't new, but your small change to it is enough to make it different. I would ...

Greetings. I am looking for a review for my portioned chapter. any help would be great.

Well the first question is hard to explain. As the particular land doesn't actually exist. I am only basing terrain and wildlife off of similarities within our own world. But ...

The tribe lives in a place near a large river where fish can be caught and the earth is fertile for growing crops. Winter brings frost, and snow on occasion, ...

@Kyllorac While I see your point, I have to say that assuming such things makes it seem to people that already having trouble with whether they want to write a ...

I would like to clear the air here. It seems that a lot of people are assuming that I haven't done research in Native American culture or the diversities there ...

@Rosendorn If I have offended you in any fashion, I apologize. It was not my intent, nor is it my intent to "butcher" or "degrade" anything in the Native American ...

I am being cautious with how I mix the concept but they are more of....baselines for me to build off of. I'm not trying to recreate them. And you are ...