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Wow this is great but slightly confusing. Like the reviwer above me: "I can’t hear the screams of parents as they search for their children, dialing 911 in their cell ...

This was fantastic. I could literally feel the tension in the story. I've noticed some fragments but other than that it was great. I hope this will help! :)

Wow this was pretty great! The two paragraphs were losing me but soon after it was good. :D The names were adorable and the story line was cool. Continue with ...

Wow this is really good. I haven't read a romantic story like this in a while. Now like the reviwer said above me, you have misspelled on some parts. Yeah ...

Wow. That's all I could say. This story is really good so far! :D I can't wait to read more!

Aww It's so cute! :D I love it! I don't know how you do pixel art but this is pretty good!

Thanks everybody for your fantastic reviews! Yes I know I really need some work on this but I will get it soon! Thank you again! I will make a new ...

Warning mentions of rape and abuse. Includes mild language. Dear Brandon, I hate you. I mean those three letters with passion. I've had a crush on you since elementary school. ...

Wow this was a really cute love story. There is nothing that would've made that better. :)

Wow thanks! :D i'm new here too! I literally just got here today!