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Re: Freaks
This is what I'd like to call RAW poetry. They cannot understand- We cannot understand always. Yet our knowledge is simple: Be us, Stand out, Be hated. *Our guide is ...
Jul 25, 2011 -
Re: Fireworks
I wish that I could say the same about the fireworks, but they were ban in my area due to the drought as a fire-hazard. lol Again, beautiful poem, nonetheless. ...
Jul 8, 2011 -
Re: Fireworks
This is an epic poem! Wow. Very nice job. It's deep and makes you think. There are always two sides to freedom. Thanks for the nice read! ------------------- -Jojo
Jul 6, 2011 -
Re: Who's To Say?
Hello, I'm Jojo and I shall be your reviewer for today! I apologize in advance for the pitiful and unhelpful bit of words that I am about to give you... ...
Jul 5, 2011 -
Re: I'm a newbie, so, like, rawr and stuff. xD
Heylo! I'm Jojo, and I hate bugs, too!I prescribe off with DEAT for best results. The aerosol kind, to prevent stickiness. And don't forge to moisturize! -- This is a ...
Jul 5, 2011 -
Re: Are you writing a novel?
This "Pat Buchanan" stuff is really getting....old... It's lost it's zing ! *dies inside* I won't bother advertising mine, 'cause I don't' think I'll continue it on this website, lol. ...
Jul 5, 2011 -
Re: No More Judging
Hello, I'm Jojo, and I shall be your reviewer for today! Grammar is in red . Others are in blue . -- Really nice! Just a few thoughts... Then , ...
Jul 5, 2011 -
Re: Rainbow Moon
Heya! I'm Jojo and I shall be your reviewer for today! Grammar is in red . Others are in blue . Fists soaked in crimson *Crimson-soaked fists , clothes ripped ...
Jun 30, 2011 -
Re: True Colors
Hello, I am Jojo and I shall be your reviewer for today. Grammar/punctuation are in red . Others are in blue . --- Hapless shades of silkscreened silk-screened past, glowing ...
Jun 30, 2011 -
Re: Chibi Len Kagamine
GAHHH! This so cuuute! *dies inside* I just want to eat him up.. or hug him- whichever one. So adorable!!!!!!!!!!!! Nice job! ------------- -Jojo
Jun 29, 2011 -
Re: Im not sure where this came from me.
Hello, I'm Jojo and I shall be your reviewer for today1 Grammar is in red . Others are in blue . Pain , so sharp;( semicolon ) W hy won't ...
Jun 29, 2011 -
Re: Closet Case
Hello, I'm Jojo and I shall be your reviewer for today! Here we Go! This is petty short, so it'll be fast. Mom , I'm sorry. I shut my the ...
Jun 29, 2011 -
Re: Puppet Master
Hello, I'm Jojo and I shall be your reviewer for today! Grammar is in red . Others are in blue . Puppet Master Hungry with revenge, I bite my tongue. ...
Jun 29, 2011 -
Re: Demons ~ Ch.1
Hello, I'm Jojo and I shall be your reviewer for today! Grammar is in red . Other are in blue . I was raised to be a top-dog. I was ...
Jun 28, 2011 -
Re: Deleted song 2
Lord have mercy... this is severe .... Maybe you should talk to someone about these sorts of feelings ( no joke). *runs away* ( I agree with the notion that ...
Jun 27, 2011
