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Nice, but please slow down. it feels as if you are rushing and it leaves the reader confused as to what is going on. A lot more description would help. ...

Much.MUCH better. Wow, you really have a gift. Nice continuation. Keep on writing! So doctor, please understand. This is all an act. I think your the one with the problem. ...

I think it's perfect/beautiful. Or maybe i am just partial because my name is Joanna.(*O_o*)

Oohh..i feel so loved.

Heheh.. you can't really critic this sort of thing( since it comes from the heart/soul) Overall, good job!

Really nice picture. >Have you tried to separate your picture into shapes before actually drawing it? It really helps proportion wise. > Also, when doing this, start everything out as ...

I am not trying to joke.. but this is a serious question.. are you talking about teenage acne?

...and welcome to the era of gangsta nerds, y'all

Wonderful... that is deep. Nice story. Really good!

Shouldn't this go under lyrics, also? Sounds nice.

Lovely. This poem has truth within each line. just on thing.. Did you mean- "..something I can't handle .." ?? i was just wondering.

Really deep...almost made me cry. But then again, I am easily moved. Bottom line, beautiful piece.

REALLY NICE! Grammar is in bold People usually drink wine with meals, Rosé, white , or red regardless, I take a swig of poison, but don't take salt, but arsenic ...

This is really good, but it sounds more like the prelude to a short story or novel or something like it.You seem to be on to something here. If i ...

nice poem.