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Nice poem. It's just a little hard to read/review. Like someone said, maybe you could shorted the lines or use different wording. For example- “Being a teenager is like passing ...

Nice. This like a love rectangle, right? You like someone that likes someone that likes someone else?.. ( by " you" i mean the narrator) I 'm watching you watching ...

muchas gracias!( thank you very much)

the poem here, u could hav added a little more. who is it ur talkin about? why do u love him/her so much? how much did he pay you to ...

thank you. That was very sweet.

Really, really deep. I loved it. Just a few things. And the winner is . . . Really, who cares? Force-fed views from the judges in their chairs. Reality TV ...

awww. the pleasure was all mine. thanks for the review!

I wanted to do something random. to lighten up the mood, you know? Because these days, sad and solemn books seem to be all the rave. It gets a little ...

Really cool. Fresh and hip?! Overall, nice job!

Lovely. Nice water-like-flow to it all.Nice words and meaning. Good job!

Really nice poem. Wonderful piece. Just one thing... ... This country, a place of brotherhood among free men, is being ruled by those with the gems. - Maybe you could ...

Really good. Keep on writing! You have talent...

Nice-- like everyone says, it looks painted( which is good). Have you heard of Gimp 2.6? It's up for a free download and you can do a whole lot of ...

Nice comparison- A girl (you liked?)and a game of cards.I am guessing this a rejection story...just guessing. **If you capitalized those words for a reason, disregard my corrections :D While ...

No, it's not a terrible poem. Always be confident in your work. It think it is quite creative.