XxMattxX

Hey. People have different opinion on things like this. I won't get worked up. There is no use typing a whole page that someone won't really read through. All i ...

Now as a Christian, I believe it would be right to state forth what I believe in this area so you know where I am coming from. What is written ...

I don't think it's ever okay for a parent or any other adult to use violence against a child. It's cowardly to hurt someone who can't fight back, and shows ...

First off, let me start by saying Welcome to YWS" and all that comes with it.. This piece of literature has a lot of grammatical errors, but fear not! For ...

Nic epoem, just a few things. I lie in wait for I know my fate when I return to the skies they will surely see through my lies my wings ...

Speaking on just a Literature perspective, this is a very good poem. I saw the spoiler, but i am still confused as to what you area trying to get across ...

Really good! Just a few things. Walking down a road, People watching me. Wishing for my abode , - Here, know what you are trying to say, but when you ...

Nice poem. i love it. Good Job! Just a few grammatical/structural revises. Ever wish you could start again ? Flick a switch, Forget the pain you don't need to add ...

My favorite part.- Just put me in a pet carrier. Because a lion without his roar is no lion at all. I like this. It is short and snippy, but ...

Eyes telling no untruth, Seeking out no flaws, my impurities Only friendship, my trust More so than a human. No pig in a poke In those understanding eyes. Nothing to ...

Nice, but just a few things...- Delicate little flakes, so beautifully they flutter, - this seems a bit.. awkward to say. Maybe you could say something entirely different, or try ...

I Really Love the last two. They have an urban feel. No offense to anyone else, but it is a breath of fresh air to see a black and white ...

Very Nice poem. I love it! Nice imagery.

Road not taken- Robert Frost TWO roads diverged in a yellow wood, And sorry I could not travel both And be one traveler, long I stood And looked down one ...

muy interesante! Try adding a lot more detail and emphasis on words like "always' and things like it. You have something special here. Seize it. Good job! --------- -jojo