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Hello, Nice work! Just a few suggestions. 'We are now in the forest of a small, uncharted island. We hope to find people to study today.'- Dr. Cheryl Pasternak I ...

Whoa. You have the goods , baby. Really nice trailer for the book. It seems like a really interesting plot. I may just look into it... lol ------------------------ -jojo.

I love the first one> the focus is absolutely wonderful! good job. Your second photograph is a little confusing, though. What are we supposed to be focusing on? the sheep ...

eeekk. I love this. I enjoy reading poems like this. Really entertaining.

First off, i think that the coloring in this portrait is beautiful really nice. Good work. Just a few things to keep in mind, though. - A quick fix to ...

Quick run through. this is actually good. Just a few suggestions. ( i am in no way trying to force you into anything/rewrite your work, i just review better when ...

I just edited what i could see, since you wrote a lot. Just to make it a little smoother. Prologue How many moments in your life can you say "this ...

Not bad. not bad at all. It has a whole lot of description. I like it.

Prologue Everyone alive has a life of some extent . - This seems a bit redundant. What are you trying to say exactly? It is obvious that those who are ...

So, to reiterate my basic opinion on the issue: I believe that sometimes spanking is necessary, but I also believe that it should be used as a last resort, only ...

Has anyone else here been spanked at all? I would be a lot more open to the accounts of those you have actually experienced it first-hand, and it would help ...

Really good poem. short, but emotional. ( i hope this isn't a true story) Scarlet lines trimmed with pink, Leaking upon snow white skin, Scar rimmed patterns on an ice-rink, ...

Moderators on YWS are able to perform marriages on YWS that have absolutely no legal meaning whatsoever. A couple wishing to get married on YWS should contact a Moderator. Only ...

Wow, these are really beautiful pictures. Wonderful Job. I love "old time-y" photos Keep on clicking! --------------- jojo

Christians arnt the only one who have this problem. The Islam religion as well. Basically all big religions that are divided to many small groups have this problem. Also the ...