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Overall, good job. Grammar is in red. Other is in blue. I would tell you if I could - But now a rose just ain’t so sweet. I would tell ...

I won't really review on content, because i have yet to read the 1st chapter, but on everything else. Grammar is in red . 2 My parents hadn’t returned home ...

Really nice. I shall review paragraph by paragraph. 5’8 and beautiful, Alice pranced down the side walk letting people admire her beauty. She had a slim, perfect body, she was ...

Nice and emotional. Grammar is in red. Battles raging on, people dying for no reason.- arguable point.Some may believe otherwise.But i like, it gives a different view. Evil people springing ...

Thank you for the nice comments. Much appreciated!

You have the goods , baybay *lol* Great job.Loved it. yeah.

Whoa. Long page... >insert review here< I am reserving a spot, 'cuz this looks interesting, but i currently am short of time. ---------------------- -jojo.

Hello.I'm Jojo, and i will review your paper. mwwaahahhaa. Here we go. My Stimulus package Nice title. There is a problem that persists in this great country, The United States ...

Good, just a few things. XIII. Misfortune “My truck wouldn’t start,” Sadie chattered , shivering in the bitter cold; she wasn’t yet prepared for this type of winter. “Come inside, ...

I shall finally sit down and read this-(reserving spot) >>>>insert review here

Banned because you are sporting your sponge bob underpanties...really? lol.

banned you for noticing....

banned for having a scary avatar...

Well.I'm a Nigerian.. but i haven't really heard of anything bad going on. There was a president change, wasn't there? Anyhow.. as said above, I can see your zeal and ...

Wow.. this is REALLY cute. great Job. I love the expression on the eyes. ( but the hairline/point of origin for the hair is a bit off center). I think ...