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Thanks for the kind review! And I apologize if anyone takes offense. ------------------- -Jojo.

True, and if you have any further complaints or problems, please pm me privatly, so we don't waste reviewing space an turn this into a debate forum. No one is ...

If you were offended, you could just say it straight up, you know? Be direct. I'll break this poem down later on, and give MY facts and experiences to explain ...

Hey, I respect your opinion even though I don't agree with it. We may live in two different parts of America. Yours may be filled with open-minded frugal conservatives who ...

Thank you!

Yeah, I get what you mean, but changing it would ruin the whole "society" effect. True, each country has it's good and bad people, but this poem focuses mainly on ...

Amen. God bless you for writing such B-E-A-utiful poem! -------------------- -Jojo.

Thank you! Exactly what I was going for!

Don't get me wrong,I love America. I just gave a different perspective on our country. Many Americans i know liked this poem and agreed with me on this. I don't ...

Gotcha! There. I got your attention. Now read my poem. :x ****I am an American Citizen yeah.. I guess i can say a few things that are wrong with my ...

eeehhh... Much better! ^_^ ------------------------ -jojo.

Thank you all so very much!

There is nothing viable enough to disprove it( that I've heard), or prove the latter.

Hello, Rachel, and welcome to YWS. Nice so far, just a few suggestions. Grammar is in red . Others are in blue . First of all, i think you need ...

Deep poem. Grammar is in red . Others are in blue. * I get what you are going for, but is just seems a little incomplete without an indirect object ...