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Thanks for the reviews! Really helpful!!! -Jojo

The name of the novel is Chapter One. Lol?

Nice poem. Grammar is in red . Others are in Blue . Sometimes, I forg o t where brain overlapped in your mind;- I think you should try to keep ...

P eace A t L ast D ive in deep mysteries await although you? have no fate.- The rest of the poem refers to "I", it gets confusing when you ...

And then titling this piece "Chapter One: Prologue" is a bit backwards; prologues come before any chapters, usually just to serve as a bit of an info-giver or a hook. ...

Yo go brotha! Power to you. My daddy is an oncologist/epidemiologist and studies this stuff( and I plan to), and we'll fight until you defeat this genetic monster. Yessssssssss!!!!! And ...

Thanks so much for the suggestions. I totally see where you are coming from! Thank you. Really appreciate it. My poet side won't let me go..* cries* lol ----------------- -Jojo

"Yo yo!" said the duck, "M'name is Ducky Ducky And I like to Quacky Quacky 'Cause I am a Ducky Duck!" Lord have mercy, this is so cute! Love it! ...

Thanks so much for the reviews! I guess that the whole "poetry spacing" thing is an old habit of mine.I've been an amateur poet up until now. Hard to kick.lol ...

May you be so kind as to review my new entry. It's in general fiction. Greatly appreciated! Thanks! -Jojo

Can you please do me a favor and review my new entry? It's in " General Fiction " because YWS currently doesn't have a thriller genre. I really appreciate it! ...

My first attempt at doing something other than poetry, so bear with me, now. And I made the book cover before I even knew what I was going to write- ...

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Hello-Welcome to YWS- I'm Jojo! And i shall be your reviewer this fine eveninginginging. Grammar is in red . Others are in blue . W ith a million things to ...

For some reason, your avatar reminds me of tap tap revolution. I seriously need to get off my ipod. Welcome, anyway! (i'm jojo.) hooray. for names... yeah. ----------------------------------- jojo.