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Re: Geeks
I love the idea that you have here, but I just don't get how this is about geeks. It screams more of hermits or dorks to me. Maybe you could ...
Mar 12, 2011 -
Re: Charlie Sheen Lost His Marbles?
True. But there really is nothing to debate on. We all know he's gone crazy. But as to the reason...... That's a formidable issue...
Mar 11, 2011 -
Re: CHAPTER ONE ~ Prologue
First. My nitpick. A few tripping over trays, banging pots together, and ran toward each other with those sweet smiles. "Ran" should be "running." THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I was waiting for ...
Mar 9, 2011 -
Re: Pull the Trigger
Hello, I'm Jojo! and I shall be your reviewer for today! Grammar is in red. Others are in blue Prologue He was ( you do not need to say "looking) ...
Mar 9, 2011 -
Re: He
He-- You know him, I’m sure you do, or someone a lot like him. He’s that guy whose voice always makes you look up in case he’s talking to you. ...
Mar 9, 2011 -
Re: Coward
“What if?” she asked. I only paused for a moment, and then it was too late to take back my words. “Nah,” I replied, “ H e’s a coward.” ( ...
Mar 9, 2011 -
Re: Snap Chapter 1
Hello, I'm Jojo. And I shall be your editor for today! Grammar is in red . Others are in blue . The pale ,(comma) yellow rays of the moon illuminated ...
Mar 9, 2011 -
Re: Your request makes me so happy!
Would you ever be so kind as to review my new entry? It's a prologue, so it's not too long. Here is a link.... Thanks a lot! Really appreciate it! ...
Mar 9, 2011 -
Re: Kafka's intellectually stimulating reviews
Would you ever be so kind as to review my new entry? It's a prologue, so it's not too long. Here is a link.... Thanks a lot! Really appreciate it! ...
Mar 9, 2011 -
Re: Bring it on! (Open)
Would you ever be so kind as to review my new entry? It's a prologue, so it's not too long. Here is a link.... Thanks a lot! Really appreciate it! ...
Mar 9, 2011 -
Re: Crafty's review thread
Would you ever be so kind as to review my new entry? It's a prologue, so it's not too long. Here is a link.... Thanks a lot! Really appreciate it! ...
Mar 9, 2011 -
Re: new reviewer:)
Would you ever be so kind as to review my new entry? It's a prologue, so it's not too long. Here is a link.... Thanks a lot! Really appreciate it! ...
Mar 9, 2011 -
Re: RAWR!...Ahem. Would You Like A Review? (CLOSED)
Would you ever be so kind as to review my new entry? It's a prologue, so it's not too long. Here is a link.... Thanks a lot! Really appreciate it! ...
Mar 8, 2011 -
Re: Please, Sir... Can I have some more reviews?
Would you ever be so kind as to review my new entry? It's a prologue, so it's not too long. Here is a link.... Thanks a lot! Really appreciate it! ...
Mar 8, 2011 -
Re: I'm on a strict all review diet!
Would you ever be so kind as to review my new entry? It's a prologue, so it's not too long. Here is a link.... Thanks a lot! Really appreciate it! ...
Mar 8, 2011