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Re: darkness
Hello! I'm Jojo and i shall be your reviewer for today! Here we go- Grammar is in red . Others are in blue . I t come? for you- that ...
Mar 14, 2011 -
Re: Sanity vs. Love
Hello! I'm Jojo and I shall be your reviewer for today! Grammar is in red . Others are in blue . I don’t need your heart, I only need you.- ...
Mar 14, 2011 -
Re: Pretty Girls Do Ugly Things
Hello, I'm Jojo and i shall be your reviewer for today! Edits are in blue . Pretty girls do ugly things . > space for punchline< Pretty girls steal when ...
Mar 14, 2011 -
Re: Spades
Hello, I'm Jojo, and i shall be your reviewer for today. These drawing are pretty cure, but really hard to see. I would suggest that you make the lines more ...
Mar 14, 2011 -
Re: A Night To Treasure
Hello! I'm Jojo and i shall be your reviewer for today! Grammar is in red . Others are in blue . As they lay here thinking and looking at each ...
Mar 14, 2011 -
Re: Empty Grave
Epic parts are bolded - All sins atoned, All debts repaid, An empty grave marks where he laid. Honest hands, Wounded and healed, Before scarred feet his followers kneeled. ( ...
Mar 14, 2011 -
Re: Mirror prologue
Hello! I'm Jojo and I shall be your reviewer today! Here we go. Grammar is in red . Others are in blue . “What's with you and these crazy ideas?” ...
Mar 14, 2011 -
Re: No. 3
Umm, hey. I would review, but everything that needs to be said( about the poem, that is) has been said. There is not such thing as a final copy, just ...
Mar 13, 2011 -
Re: You...Whoever You Are
Wow, this really looks realistic. I really like the perspective in this piece. Nice job! I'm guessing this is either about teen or unexpected pregnancy. Either way, I love it. ...
Mar 13, 2011 -
Re: Autmn Leaves
Hello! I'm Jojo and I shall be your reviewer for today! Autumn Leaves Autumn Leaves Aching branches let (their) leaves fall On (the) cold and empty ground . Thus orange-tinted ...
Mar 13, 2011 -
Re: Dark Angel
Hello! I'm Jojo, and I shall be your reviewer for today! Grammar is quite nice, I can't see nay obvious errors, so I'll just stick to content and structure on ...
Mar 13, 2011 -
Re: If I should perish...
Hello! I'm Jojo and i shall be your reviewer for today! This is really good, so i can't say that I'll be ll that helpful. “If in this world, should ...
Mar 12, 2011 -
Re: Doodles #2
I really like these pictures. My favorite part is the coloring. The first one is nice, though the head seems a little small in comparison to the width of te ...
Mar 12, 2011 -
Re: all about me
Let's be polite, here. 'Kay? Well I like that you tried to introduce yourself using the medium of poetry. *claps* But it needs a little personal touch. Make us WANT ...
Mar 12, 2011 -
Re: Cupcake
I like this. I mean, THANK GOD it wasn't a mushy romantic poem or something. But now I'm hungry.Hehahha. Bottom line- really cute. " I will devour you...." Nom Nom ...
Mar 12, 2011
