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Thanks for the review!

Thanks! ( and thanks to Solvalery)

Link to poem here Entitled "If I fall" . I know this is mushy( and I HATE mushy poems), but it actually isn't gross or anything. Tolerable! ------------ IF YOU ...

Hello! I'm Jojo and I shall be your reviewer for today! I don't see any obvious grammar or anything, so I'll stick to structure for the poem review. Edits/suggestions are ...

Here ( as requested) sorry for the delay. Life. Anyhow, I'm Jojo and I shall be your reviewer for today. No grammar that i can see, so in this review ...

gah. I'm not too sure that I'll continue this on *this* website... I'm a terrible writer in the sense that I can only write when I feel like it. ( ...

Hello, I'm Jojo and I shall be your reviewer for today! edits are in red . To Serve Him To serve you , O God ' tis not religion . ...

Heels, I'm Jojo and I shall be your reviewer for today! Edits are in red . BEST PART ( Below) Be on alert! Embrace the truth . Listen to God's ...

I have a friend who will rap it for you, maybe. Want me to ask him if he'll do it? Thanks, but no thanks. I'm on a spiritual quest right ...

Thanks for the reviews, but I'll write about what I feel compelled to. Life in general isn't care-free. So I wrote about what is near to my heart. Thank you!

Nowadays, though, it doesnt really pretain to african american's and whatnot. Racism didn't start with African Americans. It existed a loooong time before that. Just thought I'd clear that up, ...

Welcome to YWS, Kristen. I'm Jojo ( if you haven't already guessed, lol) Pleasure to meet you. Hi! I'm just new and I wanted some friends or something I guess. ...

The first poem seems like it would be an awesome rap. So, if you have any friends who like rap, maybe you could get them to record this for you. ...

Thanks for the reviews. No- I'll pass on the debate. I've made up my mind (religiously speaking), so there really is nothing to debate. But thank you for being considerate ...

Well, there is a judgment side to God that people really don't like to acknowledge  (even some of his own followers don't believe that Hell exists- but it does) And ...