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Re: Dear Mr. Rapist
Very, very nice. Emotional and compelling! I wish I could so a better review.... *likes* Keep writing! ------------------ -Jojo
Jun 15, 2011 -
Re: War
Dude, this is really deep. I liked it... Most epic beginning ever... Everyday is a battle, Every night a victory, Every breath a bullet, Every step a bomb. Very nice. ...
Jun 15, 2011 -
Re: So I had an idea for a story....
Where's the romance? The love ? Does she fall in love with the tour guide? *is confused*
Jun 15, 2011 -
Re: you got one more chase
What???? Please... Explain it further. you got one more chanse cause baby i cant take it anymore and i mean it cause baby baby i mean it i mean it ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: Are ghosts real?
The Holy Ghost. Amen. I vote yes.
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: --
I'll add this to my reading list and reserve a review space! ( returning the favor) ---------- -Jojo
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: Booty Shorts
Seems like everyone thinks that the last line is out of place *removes*
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: Swagger
Well.... It's very emotional.... really... I don't know what else to say.... ------------- -Jojo
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: Ducks
Hello, I'm Jojo and I shall be your reviewer for today... Ducks, ducks Everywhere. Ducks, ducks They hate to share. I wish I were a duck. Maybe I'd get some ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: Booty Shorts
black-woman-attitude1.jpg OH NO YOU DI'INT Nope, that is not a picture of me, and I have no idea who that woman is... I just pasted it from Google. No editing ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: insert coin
You get nothing... *inserts another frozen burrito*
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: End
Hello, I'm Jojo and I shall be your reviewer for today! Here we go! What will happen when it all comes to an end? What will happen when the sky ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: Voiceless Chapter One (In progress)
Hello!I'm Jojo and I shall be your reviewer for today! Grammar is in red . Others are in blue . Comments are in lavender . Here we Go! As November ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: insert coin
You get stabbed... *inserts frozen burrito*
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: terrorist?
Hello, I'm Jojo and I shall be your reviewer today! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ This poem is cute. The idea is cute, and the concept it cute. The execution.. not so much... You ...
Jun 13, 2011
