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Thank you very much. Yes it helped quit a bit, I appreciate your effort and time. ^^

Thank you both very much. ^^

Thanks to everyone who commented. I appreciate it. ^^

Thank you guys. ^^

Is it that bad? uhhh... PLEASE HELP.

^^ the wonderful people above have caught everything, I suppose all i can do is praise your work. I like the storyline so far. I usually dont' read fanfic bu, ...

smileforever, Thank you very much. I've never been one for spelling. I'm glad you liked it, thank you for taking the time to read my work. ^^

That's because it was an introduction to Raven's life. Trust me there will be more than enough time through out the novel to express Raven and Eric's situation.

Thank you to everyone for your wonderful advice. I won't let it go to waste. As for using spell check, I did. I think I've been picking the wrong corrections ...

Thank you very much Kirsten, I understand they're not trying to be harsh, they're just trying to help ^^ yes, this was lacking in depth...but that's what I get for ...

Thank you Tatra, that was very useful. ^^ It's clear what I have to do to improve this now. ^^ Thanks so much for your time and effort, I won't ...

Thank you very much KailaMarie. It doesn't matter whether you were the first post or not. It means the same to me. ^^ Everyone here is so helpful! ^^ I'm ...

Hiya sokool15 ^^ Thank you. It means a lot to me that you'd take the time to help me fix the small things. ^^ Yes I know the dots are ...

200397, Thank you so very much. ^^ It seems the heronie bit was a bad choice. I'll remove it. To be honest I'm not a very big Twilight fan and ...

^6 Thank you very much Manzanna. I know I could add more to this, and to be honest I don't like the ending much either. But I have a nasty ...