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Thank you very much KailaMarie. It doesn't matter whether you were the first post or not. It means the same to me. ^^ Everyone here is so helpful! ^^ I'm ...

Hiya sokool15 ^^ Thank you. It means a lot to me that you'd take the time to help me fix the small things. ^^ Yes I know the dots are ...

200397, Thank you so very much. ^^ It seems the heronie bit was a bad choice. I'll remove it. To be honest I'm not a very big Twilight fan and ...

Hiya. ^^ I like this so far, just a few mistakes. The others have caught most of them, but your first sentence is driving me nuts! "Daniel Pearce. You could ...

^6 Thank you very much Manzanna. I know I could add more to this, and to be honest I don't like the ending much either. But I have a nasty ...

Hiya. ^^ I enjoyed this very much. there isnt' much I can say that others haven't already. I would like to suggest not having long parts of your story in ...

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I understand completely. ^^ Really. Though I'd like to point a few things out...I responsed to your comment in the early hours of the morning (Like at 3 or 4am.) ...

June. Not at all! at least not compared to some of the comments I've been getting lately. I understand what you mean completely. I usually take more time for my ...

Hiya Squall, First off, thank you very much for being honest and trying to be constructive. BUT as is seems you’re a bit confused. A preference is NOT a prologue. ...

This is really funny. ^^ But I wouldn't consider it poetic... There are enough comments and they all hit the nail on how you can make this more poetic...But from ...

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Hiya ^^ I don't think this is pointless. All poetry (All writing in general) has to have a point. Even if it's hard to spot, beaneth all words there is ...

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Hi there. I'm Samantha, I'm not sure what I'm suppose to put here... But i'm new. I don't bite... I love to read poetry and i love to help people, ...