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Hiya, So I have to agree with the majority of those who have commented before me. I think this seems more like preface than an actual chapter. It's a nice ...

Hiya, I’m Sam, I’ll try to help you out as much as I can alright? I hope I don’t come off too harsh! Was it supposed to be this way ...

Hiya, I’m Sam, I hope I don’t come across as too cruel! Good luck. :) It's on the streets, In people you meet, Even in those heartless souls. When it ...

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^^ the wonderful people above have caught everything, I suppose all i can do is praise your work. I like the storyline so far. I usually dont' read fanfic bu, ...

Wow, that's really good. I checked it out because i've been wanting to check out the type of stories Anne Rice wrote. This is a really, really good fanfic, and ...

smileforever, Thank you very much. I've never been one for spelling. I'm glad you liked it, thank you for taking the time to read my work. ^^

That's because it was an introduction to Raven's life. Trust me there will be more than enough time through out the novel to express Raven and Eric's situation.

Thank you to everyone for your wonderful advice. I won't let it go to waste. As for using spell check, I did. I think I've been picking the wrong corrections ...

Hiya. ^^ I’m Sam. I’m a little new at this and I hope I don’t sound too harsh. Let me know if I am please. ^^ The number one reason ...

Hiya ^^ I’m Sam. I’m a little new at this, but I’ll try my best to be of as much help as possible. I don’t like being harsh so if ...

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Thank you very much Kirsten, I understand they're not trying to be harsh, they're just trying to help ^^ yes, this was lacking in depth...but that's what I get for ...

Thank you Tatra, that was very useful. ^^ It's clear what I have to do to improve this now. ^^ Thanks so much for your time and effort, I won't ...