Xreigon

OOOOOH! That was pretty cool. I am excited to see what happens. I would say that when it say "The hana, a magic button-like thing," it sounds a little awkward. ...

Ok, heres the rest of it. ________________________________________ Standing in the doorway was Tristyn. I blushed and said, “Sorry. I was doing some work with my mom. How did you even ...

Wow. That was quite good. I love the way that this poem makes me think. there are so many ways interpretations that could come of this. The way that I ...

I have one little nit-pick that the others didn't mention. In the first sentence, it says "I opened my eyes only to shut them tight." You need a comma in ...

I'm kind of new at this, so any comment would help a bunch. _____________________________________________________________ Sometimes, I wish that I could curse my parents. What kind of people names the

Wow. I really enjoyed that. It makes me very interested in finding out more about your characters and your plot. Who is the Order? When does this story take place? ...

I don't know what the worst 5 are, but the worst book ever is 20,000 leagues under the sea. I probably understood about one word in the book.

I think that the best way to fin baby names is from the Writers Digest book called something like Book of Character Names. It has names catagorized by every nationality, ...

I really liked it and you did a good job of tellin the story. I do want to know a little bit more about your character, though. I feel like ...

WOW! That is so sad! I love the way that you described that and I think that is a beautiful poem. Great job.

Hi. I'm Xreigon and I have no idea what I'm doing. If anyone has any advice, please share it. I'm so lost. :?

A Shadow, spreading and growing, behind your back. It stretches, corrupting a massive amount of creatures and places. It’s true entity flits from one place to another, hiding its true ...