Xreigon

To add drama: ... Ex: Drama.... Woah. O.O

My problem is that I love both fire and water, and I can be both passionate and firey as well as calm! :shock:

If your character was dropped into the middle of a desert, what would they do first?

"I would do it, as long as it would keep my country safe." -Talon

I reached the dark alleyway and my eyes traveled up the dead end. A pounding sounded in my ears and the ground felt shaky beneath my feet. This must be ...

Wow. That was beautiful. I really really enjoyed your story and you did a very good job of editing it. I am sad for Roselyn and the war that she ...

Hmm. I have a few things to say about this, just as general advice. Your dog's grammer is atrocious, but is that the way that you are wanting it to ...

Awwww! I loved this next section. Your story is really developing in good ways and I am captivated. I do have to point out a few nit-picks though, because thats ...

No, no , no, no! This can't happen! They need to stay undercover! ...Hmmm, very interesting. I love the controversy between the characters!! It think that the story is getting ...

That was very interesting. I like the whole seeing ghosts thing, plus the fact that the ghost has a great sense of humor. It There was one little nit-pick that ...

Wow. This is heavy. It deals with the big issue of sucide that is in our culture nowadays. Its so sad and terrible. I really hope that this poem was ...

Hmmm. An interesting perspective. I hadn't thought about things this way and I seem to be one of the "brainless-girls", though I think that Justin Bieber is pretty ridiculous nad ...

Wow. This is terrible. It was really sad and I feel as if I don't want to hear any more, because I don't want anything else to happen. You did ...

I ran from school as fast as I could. Stupid, stupid, stupid!! How could I let myself stay this late? I could feel the tingling that always start before the ...

I think that this was pretty good. I didn't catch any little grammer or punctuation mistakes (a first for me), but I do think that maybe Mace Windu's character is ...