Xirenia

It makes sense in the context, this comes from the middle-ish of the story (believe me, she has reason to be so bitter) but I totally understand where you're coming ...

Thanks Charlii :) That's a great critique. I see where that might be confusing. I'll fix it right away :)

As I said. I really know nothing about writing poetry. I'll go over it tomorrow morning and try fix it. It's no surprise you don't understand it though. I'm a ...

Hey :) Demeter, you're right about the whole story thing. I wasn't really thinking consciously when I said this was a "story". By that I mean I wasn't really saying ...

Thanks so much :) You have no clue how much it means to have my passion appreciated. I knew when I wrote it, that the whole 'used to be best ...

Okay, wow, lots of editing. Anyway, the thing about the names. Human Charlie had a different name at first, but then I thought, Hey, wouldn't be kind of cool and ...

Hey, thanks for replying everyone :D Maddy, you are one hundred percent right about the shrink. I didn't think properly about how she would act. I've never actualy been to ...