Xirenia

Hey guys :D This is the fourth chapter in the story I'm writing, and I hope you enjoy it. I highly appreciate grammar corrections or any tips on improving my ...

Hey, I don't have anyone in particular to thank, except Nate of course (you are a legend) but nonetheless, I would like to congratulate everyone on an amazing and insane ...

Gentle snowflakes, flirting with the sky. I'm not so sure sky rhymes with sky, but it's not a big issue My feeble hands touch the window sill, Anxious for him ...

Hey guys :D This is the second part. Enjoy! :D The next three days were hell. Every second I begged for Saturday to finally come. Many things defined that week; ...

Hey, hey :D Her tears of ice Raining down upon the tide . As midnight falls The depths of the ocean grow oh so wide . Also, I think maybe ...

Hey there :D You never loved me. I don't agree with Sasha. I think this line is good. Granted, I think it would have been better at the end, but ...

So...I'm sitting here, right? And I'm wondering to myself why some people just get to be so talented. And I'm thinking, it's just not fair. There isn't some way you ...

Hey guys :) This is part one of my third chapter. I realized it's like freakishly long so I've put it in two parts. I really hope you enjoy it ...

Wow, that was amazing... The first two lines really hit you. It's really meaningful, and you don't guess that you're talking about a father until the very end. The punctuation ...

This is good, there are just some key elements you need to fix to make it great :D 1 . You need to chose which tense you're writing in. Right ...

Hey :D Thought I'd review this lovely prologue for you. I'll put in bold how I think it could be improved. I'll never forget the day Ant was taken from ...

Hey there =] I would very much appreciate it if you would review the first chapter of a book I'm writing. If you have no time then don't worry about ...

Hello, my name is Chelsea and I'm in Geography class right now :smt003

Hey...This is the second chapter of the book I'm writing. It's my least favorite chapter and I'm running out of ideas on how to improve it. Ha ha, chapter three ...

I like :D This is a very good prologue. It leaves a lot to the imagination and makes you wonder what you're actually implying. Young Gun, before me, thinks that ...