Xirenia

I enjoyed this a lot :D I love how short is it, but it gets to the point. Everyone else has picked up on the grammar errors, so I can't ...

Hey there :) Shame, I was browsing and I saw that no one had commented on this for you, so I thought I'd do a review :) All my grammar ...

Hey Loveless, I'm here to do a review for you :) I'll put all my grammar corrections in red, and explain other points below. If I rewrite a sentence to ...

Hey :) Demeter, you're right about the whole story thing. I wasn't really thinking consciously when I said this was a "story". By that I mean I wasn't really saying ...

Hey :) This is just some random piece I came up with. It doesn't reflect my personal views, I just thought it was nice and gloomy so I wrote it ...

Hi all :D I'm here to review. Okay, here is what I'm willing and not willing to review: Will review Romantic fiction Other fiction Fantasy fiction Dramatic poetry Other poetry ...

Okay, this is the worst opening line I can think of right now. Not only is it bad, but it annoys the hell out of me. It isn't really just ...

Suzanne smiled half-heartedly at her date, Will, who would not stop staring. Pushing a napkin around her plate, glazen eyes wandering listlessly about the room, she tried to remember why ...

Hey :) Here to do a review for you Every breath I take is painful, and after each one, I do not wish to take another on account of the ...

Hello, fellow humans, At this moment in time, I have no idea what to tell you, so I'm winging it. :D Firstly, my user name. I would love to share ...

Oh, here we go. Here are some of the absolute worst books (if you can call them that) I've ever read. How they got published is a genuine mystery to ...

Thanks so much :) You have no clue how much it means to have my passion appreciated. I knew when I wrote it, that the whole 'used to be best ...

Okay, wow, lots of editing. Anyway, the thing about the names. Human Charlie had a different name at first, but then I thought, Hey, wouldn't be kind of cool and ...

This is a short story I've written for the December competition. It's kind of morbid, sorry. :? Don't take this as any indicator of my festiveness. I adore Christmas, the ...

Hey hey, May I first say that you are a wonderful writer. I'd describe your style as dreamy, and airy. And romantic, of course :D It's lovely. So, here are ...