Xirenia

This is a very sweet poem :) I like it a lot. I had two nitpicks: I exit my abode into the outside world There's something way too formal about ...

Hmmm... I'm distantly related to the queen of England (but who isn't, right?) and relatively closely related to the Duke of Wellington, according to my Dad. Not a single person ...

Hello kakagirl :) I don't have time right now to get into the small nitpicks, but I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed this beginning. It's interesting to ...

Wow, I really liked this :) Like the others said, you really do have the writing style of a professional. Very sophisticated and lyrical. There was only one nitpick that ...

Why thank you :) So are you! I love your hair :)

Thanks Charlii :) That's a great critique. I see where that might be confusing. I'll fix it right away :)

3 pics of me :) Wicked: Loove the lunch box :) Bubblegum: My goodness, you are GORGEOUS! :o

Hey all :) I have been extremely busy with school and so I haven't been able to be here much. Anyway, I've been working on something new and I really ...

Wow, Drawer, this is really good. To be honest, I think some people are over nitpicking it to suit their taste and that irritates me a little bit. You write ...

I wrote this the other day and I thought I'd see what you guys thought of it. I had a cold and I was in bed and it just sort ...

I feel rather silly that I couldn't find that on my own, but thanks so much :D

Yeah, the second one was so much better. Made me smile :)

Hey guys, I haven't been on for a while, but I've noticed that genres have now been split up into either short stories or novels. I think this is a ...

This is an idea I'm playing with. Not really sure where it's going to go just yet. I have the general plot worked out in my head, but God only ...

Wow, this is really good stuff. I can't say I've ever seen this style of poetry (But then again it's not my forte). I really like it. It gives the ...