Xena

I was born a ramblin man....hahhahaa.. i crack myself up... but maybe youre right,, maybe i am ramblin too much... but.... hummm.... maybe ill cut out my ramblin adn make ...

hey hey you... i can say i liked it overall, yea i did... the opening kastanza was good, like said by these other people, but liek what that guy said ...

You know the title now heres the game plan.. .. im posting all 3 them these babies all in one limited adition box set..that right you heard me... even comes ...

the ending was pretty good... and i dont want to hear anymore of your... oh i wrote it in 10 min dribble drabble drooble... anyway.. even tho reptition of the ...

alright... its still the same thing.. i think.. i did alot of skimming.. and if youw ant to knwo why.. ill tell you.. because i didnt see anything new or ...

ububuub the opening line was pretty good... then the rest i really had no use for.. tooo slow for my opinion.. a good opening line but not really an attention ...

hummmum.. letsa see.. alright.. the beginning was a bit rough, yea like said before... sentence structure and whatever needs to be worked on. reading the first paragraph.. (I have no ...

actually, dont use the magic panda.. i think im gonna use that one now.. but you know.. mix it up a bit

ye ye ye good points.. huh.. yea like.. this was a good story and all.. like.. i dotn know. but it just felt hollow.. you know.. add more.. weight to ...

ye ye ye i dont get whats acctually going on here... like.. are they singers.. are they ballarina/singers like in a circus or something.. and why cant they go bowling ...

ay AY.. you both can go to hell.. no im kidding.. you guys have some good points and stuff.. and good looking on that sailor... ill even admit this first ...

ahh... it was a bit long but i huffed and giggled at some parts... i liked how it all connected to the true history of the universe and earth and ...

once you said how to pronounce the names.. i said to myself.. this guy isnt tellingme how to pronounce the names,,, is he? and then i wrote this. and ps. ...

GOD'S PINK SKUNK (part one of an epic trilogy (3)) no idea how this coding works... so I WOULD LIKE TO INFORM YOU THAT THE NEXT THREE CHAPTERS, the whole ...

so wait... all of this site is done in forum form? did you just post more story? anyway.. i tripped up on some of the sentences... other than that.. its ...