Xena

hmm maybe ur not a cheerleading robot, but you sure are as conceded as one!!! oooohhh... no im kidding... you had a few good lines in here.... id take those.. ...

I was stood on the rooftop in the rain, WHAT ARE you, SIMPLE!!?.. no but really.. whats up with that? A gun to my head again. I have never really ...

Well, if Henry entered the prize, he might have a chance getting the prize. enterered the prize, chance at getting the prize? badly worded, i dont like it... remove it... ...

Thank you, you cute little bear that i thought was an ant eater at first you. Im working on the re-write! and so maybe it will be better then! OK! ...

hehehe unfurled.. thats a funny word.. like hippopotomuses... the hippopotomus unfurrled his gangly tounge. you can use that one if you want.. but anyway.. and what if i do still ...

i dont know what what happend.. i assume it was good and tasted like cake.. but i just dont know what it is.. you know what i mean?

ha.... haha... :elephant:

eh, wasnt really feeling this, the beginning anyway, didnt flow to well in my mind, but the end was prettty good and depressing, can relate-- so this is it? ok ...

hey hey how come none of mhy questions got answers.. what am i not getting that this guy with the bear picture gets.. i see this guy going up to ...

hey hey waht story.. by joyce who.. what story by jocye.. i dont think i totally got this.. like some parts clicked and then it went away and then drifted ...

hmm meh meh meh mehmeh... i dont know. you could of taken out the boulder, colorodo. like it didnt do much for the piece. Even colorodo would of been suffeceint... ...

Open wide, said the transvestite hooker, I've got a big gooey long one coming up--nice and steamy-- just like you like em. actullay i dont think thats a bad one ...

ooooh spicy spicy meata ball!!

fargh again... tooo many commas no more commas noooo noooooooooo!... i take it you like guys with ebony black hair.... and well i think this girl has horrible tastes,,, anywho, ...

this hurt... pretty pain ful but i reached the end.... ugh i kept skimming through and then it was like weird so i had to go bauck up and read ...