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Re: Monster
so this is true you say.. and you showed this to your friend and she said.. brilliant great.. shit.. id be like.. damn. this is how you think of me. ...
Jul 18, 2008 -
Re: Diamante Defense
so.. this is in the future.. where time dosnt need to be kept track of? why not? what happend? theres a type of peace in the world? thats kool, who ...
Jul 18, 2008 -
Re: Arekkusu- blades of darkness
this guy is a samarai right? so dont listen anything complicated said about speaking.. how does he know how samarais speak? i bet they do speak like yoda, arnt they ...
Jul 18, 2008 -
Re: wolf hunt
hummmum.. yea the grammar was a bit off, misplaced commas adn such.. like the ending.. no commas needed... but i think that one person up there probably corrected everything... witha ...
Jul 18, 2008 -
Re: wolf hunt
[quote="Gabe"]THE WOLF HUNT As the two wolves sprinted forward, snarling viciou
Jul 18, 2008 -
Re: Lost in the forest
this was pretty good for what it was.. but short? eh.. ridickuslosly short? noo.. a few grammitical errors here and there ... no biggies.. in fact im not even sure ...
Jul 18, 2008 -
Re: Welcome New Members!
i went through everybodies post and memorizzed and learned everybodys name... no i didnt.. this is ridickulous... this place confuses and scares me
Jul 18, 2008 -
Re: At All Costs -- Part 1
pretty good descripts here and there..; is this where im supposed to write my stuff? anyway pretty good not bad.. so this is about cults is it? petty good not ...
Jul 18, 2008 -
Re: The truth about shoes
okie dokie... huh it was amusing but was kind of hard to read.. like im not the grammar master but the structure confused me.. like.. shed rather buy shoes like ...
Jul 17, 2008
