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:) There were a few grammatical mistakes, but other than that, it was really good.

It was all good, except for that tiny spelling mistake :)

I like it a lot. I really can't criticize, because it seems that everyone got here before me =] It was pretty good. Oh, BTW, thanks for the blog comment ...

Wow. This is even better than the first one I reviewed. I love it!!

Well, personally, I think it was great! I really did like it. I especially liked the last two lines "She waits and waits by the ocean, For a newly opened ...