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  • Lyric Poetry Re: Fade away

    :) There were a few grammatical mistakes, but other than that, it was really good.

    Jan 10, 2008
  • Narrative Poetry Re: A Love Poem of Sorts

    It was all good, except for that tiny spelling mistake :)

    Jan 10, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: Shadow

    I like it a lot. I really can't criticize, because it seems that everyone got here before me =] It was pretty good. Oh, BTW, thanks for the blog comment ...

    Jan 10, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: broken love

    Wow. This is even better than the first one I reviewed. I love it!!

    Jan 9, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Dead Angel (critique me!! <3)

    Well, personally, I think it was great! I really did like it. I especially liked the last two lines "She waits and waits by the ocean, For a newly opened ...

    Jan 9, 2008


The last of the human freedoms is to choose one's attitudes.
— Viktor Frankl