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Do you still have spots open? If so..... Name: Nyte Bello Age: 17 Appearance: Gender: Female Personality: Sarcastic, tough and knows how to take care of herself, but is kind ...

Pain. Burning, searing pain crept it's way through my now violated veins. I was paralyzed. Blind but for the flashes of red and white that I only assumed were the ...

Sounds good. Only one thing. I thought it was wench not wrentch?

Thanks for the review :) I really appreciate it. I'm looking to post my old stuff as is, see what you all say and then revise it :) XO Change

I agree with everyone else. Your are a very talented writer. You will go far. I look forward to reading more of your stuff.

Ambush Critique ruthlessly :) How can I be better? XO Change

Okay. I have kind of an idea but someone to build on it with me would be awesome! Two women in prison..... I can get together the characters and once ...

Okay, lots of questions :) Here we go.... Who's your favorite author, if any? Thats a hard one. I don't think I have one. Theres just to many to choose ...

I loved this poem! If it was any shorter, I would think it were unfinished. I loved that you rhymed but subtly so. With some rhyming, it takes some of ...

I’m tired of this feeling, This Hollow Lonely Perpetually Depressed Feeling; That never seems to leave, It’s always there, Just like the hole in my chest, It will step back ...

I liked this but I felt it wasn't finished. You could add more to this piece and it would be awesome, not that it isn't already ;) Keep Improving :) ...

Okay, so I cheated and didn't read all of the reviews. So if i'm repeating anything.....oh well. Repetition is one of the best ways to learn :) I really liked ...

Thanks so much for your reviews. I didn't really revise this before I posted it. It's been on my blog for awhile. I like allot our ideas, all of you. ...

Dip doesn't really sound forced to me, and cigarettes and dip go hand and hand, their both tobacco products. I overall liked it, although I would like to know whose ...

Hey everyone! I'm Rae or Change, whichever you prefer. I've been writing since.....third grade, I want to say. Although i have NOTHING from then. Sucks. Just in this past year ...