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Wow, is what came to mind while reading this. Wow at the emotion, at the words you used to describe it and wow at the situation. You are a very ...

This is a good first chapter or intro for a novel or short story but is to short alone. Your lacking in information, in the first chapter of a story ...

Thank you all so much for your words of encouragement and sympathy. This was something I just threw together, wrote the words as they came to mind. I will edit ...

This poem is a very personal one and has a story behind it, but then again, what writing doesn't? In May a very close friend and past boyfriend of mine ...

I really like this one. The way it's written, the concept, the message. The whole thing is really good. Very Good Job Keep It Up XO Change

I think this poem would work better if there was some kind of pattern. Some of the lines in it seem very out of place because of the lack of ...

Ooooooo. A story set in hell would be flippin amazing. The Magical Fariy Of Doom is her title. But she goes by Doom. She's a messenger for her kinda friend ...

Okay, that reply to ya'll's reviews sounded kind of rude. I really didn't mean for it to be and I'm soooo happy that you both took time to review some ...

Okay :) First off, Nyte is her name :) Second, she really is in the basement. And not knowing if her dream was really a dream or if it was ...

I enjoyed this even though it was a bit sad. It was cute and had a decent storyline to it. The grammatical errors are fixable but easily overlooked. Try reading ...

“No! Go Back! I didn’t mean to!” I screamed as a rotting corpse drug it’s almost decomposed body towards me, the reason it was out of the ground in the ...

I really liked this one. I did find a couple things that could be improved though. In this line, Her family does not see All the scars on her arms ...

I like this piece but it seemed kind of choppy to me. I'm not one to nit pick at grammar or punctuation but it's important in pieces like this. It ...

Overall, I liked this poem. It had allot of emotion in it and writing about cutting is a rough topic to cover but you did it well. I agree that ...

I liked this piece. Very emotional. It's always good when you can get out what your feeling like this. I did think some of your lines just didn't go together. ...