Wulie

aw :) - I'd like to ermmm thank cheese for being so tastey!

you can't have crumpets with out toasting them they taste funny!!!!!

Katie my best mate for getting me this far in life I love her so much :)

algebra is evil *waves hand*

The start is much better now a little more descriptive but still portraying the idea of some one unsure of what to say!

you don't have them in USA???!!!?!!?! It is "c" I've got packet infront of me :|! I'm not all dumb you know *grins* crumpets are spoungey doey round things they're ...

I am the councillor for all my friends, I like listening and helping people! wux

nope with a "c" hmmm butter thne butter and a tiny winy bit or marmite!

A bit weak at the start, but a powerful ending I really loved it's just one of those classics. However I wouldn't say it was one of the best however ...

though the point is hard to find its so well written the words sending you to their destination flowing freely and wonderfully, though I feel you may have ot expaling ...

awww babe!!! *huggles* you look very pwetty!!

who here absolutley loves crumpets? they're heaven!!!! I am crurently munching on one what do you have on your crumpet? wu

I loved the imagry in this poem it start very powerful... The untouched water hitting the shore brand new rain drops knocking on my door ] Great start! No leaves ...

very well written I liked it though I didn't love it - but at the moment I haven't read much that made me love! I want to be There with ...

I enjoyed this poem as chevy said it wasn't dull though it could have a little more imagery in it I think that would really complete it. For all the ...