Wulie

Cheers sam - still not sure on it but hey glad you liked it :)!

MEH! Sorry but I have done different structed poems, no one seems to realise that look under dramatic poems. I did this one with different number of lines I didn't ...

I don't own a livestrong one but as I've said I own others and I am begining to feel ashamed to wear them looking around school almost every other person ...

chevy is known for some great poems and a lovely personality.

too vague, but you have to potentional in there but you didnt get your point across at all. wu

I don't have a credit card other wise I'd be glad to pay you hold such a wonderful site...

Anothology - ever got it? Its poerty but not my kind, and after two years constantly studing it, it wears out a little

welcome and *huggles from every one at YWS*

jack daniels *hmmm* *dribbles*

wonderful! Powerful short snappy words vague yet so clear really god rhyming thanks for sharing it with us!!

I love this, it's yet another great work of yours yet again I have little to say as I'm pretty poo at pointing stuff out... Great ending it fades off ...

I loved the start it was great I can relate to it so well. However it went on for a just a little to long and dragged it's self out ...

This was good though, I didn't perticually love it, it was a bit weak. As sam said I like the basic idea but it just wasn't powerful enough..

This is great I love it :)!!! I walk through life backwards She walks forwards I look through the rearview mirror She looks though the windshield This is great, fav ...

Great poem of course however I don't like the end it throws me too much - I don't know you may want that affect? salvation is silence in idle thoughts ...