Wulie

And I swear I wont let you win again, the angels above bleeding for you, the pearly white gates of perfection Covered in roaring fire of hate And I can't ...

Thank you muchously :) I just write how I feel never really any good but the words mean stuff to me, my thoughts written down. muchous love wu

I love it - I can relate to that poem yet I find it hard to be content. Its an amazing peom you should be very proud of it :) ...

Can you hear me now I have nothing left to lose I'm naked and broken my scars shinning in the moonlight I'm so tired of fighting each day just to ...

I really like it... 'Tis very good :)... sounds like march haunts you alot strange 'cause it does to me... Ironic I guess :roll: :) love wu x

Always the bad one, Always wrong never right, Trapped in this society, So close to the edge of all reason. And you push me, More and more, I feel the ...

For the first time in a while I smiled today A warm glimmer of hope ran through me How I wished you could've seen it But how little did I ...

I can relate to that poem so much... its very good

Its really good I like it muchously :)

Thank you :) I shall change a few things :D

Hey I really like you lyric/song/poem :) Its a bit short yet still effective I'm no good and saying whats good and whats not I just personally like it escpecially ...

I never knew When I held you close How lucky I really was But now as I sit Tears trapped In my heart I can see I had it all ...

I have changed it what do you think?

Thank-you Sorry I am not much of a writer, though I thought I would give it a try.

I'm at your feet, Tears in my eyes, Can't hold on, Can't say good bye. So tired of putting on this smile, I know all I'll ever be to you, ...