Wulie

I really love this poem. The way its written the words you use and just genarally how you put it. Your everlasting desire to make me feel terrible is killing ...

may I just say you are very welcome to your veiw and I do appreicate it but you can be very, very disheartening with your words. I do try my ...

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yeah but I'm saying whatever we say including me - we can never comprehend it. Thank you for your comments.

Another night, another day, Tear stained sheets I can't bear to change, Why did you have to come? My skin smothered with your scent, My life a book written for ...

Nothing can comprehend, The pain they must feel, All they ever had, Washed away. God’s power ruining their lives, Whatever did they do wrong? Honest people fighting to keep alive, ...

They look into my eyes, But they don’t understand why I lie, The twisted sea swirling inside of me, How I wished they understood me. Been to so many therapists ...

Cheers - I prefer it now though I still feel it needs some perfection

Thanks - it wasn't meaning to be a poem they are just my thoughts put how I see them - people can take them as they wish. I don't write ...

Thank you VERY much :) no one really likes my stuff lol, and its really nice to hear a compliment thank you!!! Merry christmas muchous love wu

To every story, There is a dark side of the light, Seeping walls of secrets, Unknown ends. The notion in my head, Spinning me round, I believed if I walked ...

Hey no worries - just read it again and I don't like it lol - yeah it is a free verse... I no good at the rhyming stuff!!! thanks for ...

Thank you muchously I wasn't offended at all its really helped me I shall try to edit it now thanks :)

Never again, never again, Will I succumb to the back of your hand, Forever bruised, Scars you will never see. I tried to burn these lies but they keep coming ...