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Re: [You]
Hours of watching you, Like I used to, Yet this time, You didn't watch me back. Minuets passed and courage grew, One word to you is all I need, Just ...
Jan 14, 2005 -
Re: [Time]
So here we are, Time has passed, And the promises have been broken, I remain the hostage of your past. I can no longer last, with these emotions inside of ...
Jan 13, 2005 -
Re: My Life for now!!
love it I really do... nothing to say sorry!!! wu x
Jan 11, 2005 -
Re: [Is this my good bye?]
Another day rising to its end, The bus journey home confronts me, Screaming kids and splitting headaches, Goodbye for another night. The questions in my heart riding to my confusion, ...
Jan 11, 2005 -
Re: [Last night.]
I totally agree with you myriadne!!!! I'm not happy with tihs poems I've got the right ideas lol just not the right words so I shall change it thank you ...
Jan 9, 2005 -
Re: 11
I'm really sorry but I cant tell you what to change ass there's too many could you maybe post one at a time... too much for my little brain sorry ...
Jan 9, 2005 -
Re: [Last night.]
I waited last night, My hair in place for you, Hours of perfection unoticed My flaws hidden beneath my mask. Seconds passed, Minutes mounted, Hours left me alone, Guests arrive ...
Jan 9, 2005 -
Re: Let Go
Yet asgain I love this - I do like your poems alot!!! My only saviour holding the key to this whole terrifying experience bathed in celestial light and floating nonchalantly ...
Jan 8, 2005 -
Re: [Untitled]
I really love your stuff I a\m a bit like same I just love things and never very good with saying what to change. There really isn't anything wrong with ...
Jan 8, 2005 -
Re: [Unread message.]
Hey - thanks guys, same you're always nice about my work :). And brad well thank you hehe. I'm not to sure I like this poem I like the theme, ...
Jan 8, 2005 -
Re: [Unread message.]
God only knows I need you, Tears bracing my cheeks, Questions forming inside me, Lies cradling my heart. Please turn on your phone, Read my texts of denial, I didn't ...
Jan 7, 2005 -
Re: Let Me Cry
I really love it all of it I really its written so well I guess I relate to these things so much. Your pride was turned up so loud, You ...
Jan 5, 2005 -
Re: [Why is it always more than words?]
yay thank you all :lol: you really cheered me up after my poo day :) hehe. Sam you are very cool I like this:: *Great flow. Each line kinda melts ...
Jan 5, 2005 -
Re: My Heart Has Been Sealed
Love it :) really do all gooood :thumb:
Jan 5, 2005 -
Re: [Why is it always more than words?]
In a collision of lies you stand, A smile of peace upon your face, Your eyes a picture of innocence, Your skin purer than any waters. One more step and ...
Jan 5, 2005
