Wulie

get me out of these chains free me from this guilt this pain Why am I made to watch these memories? the button stuck on repeat this is also quite ...

Thank you soo much of course inc you're always write about what you say! and I shall when I have time go over all of my poem however at the ...

The bottom pic isnt the photograph is the bottom picutre if a copy of a famous photograph *I've forgotten then name though!* thank you for your comment:)!!!

I really like this poem actually I donno just seemed to get to the point well written I mean yeah obviously every poem could be better. Water wells Feelings well ...

I like this poem but yet I don't I cant put my finger on it lol sorry this is really unhelpful... I can relate to it because I can picture ...

I absolutley love it I really do as like brads poerty its so different and ahhh I just really love it, the wordsyou use are beautiful!!! wu x

It sounds a little to chopping and as the others have said forced due to the constant ryhming but you've got a great idea with the poem and I liked ...

Hey - erm the following pictures are pictures of nude women so don't view them if you shouldn't lol... and I appoligise for the crappy drawings I am so bored ...

After re-deading I agree it seems to be very forced on my part the start I like then it becomes all to clicheeee ay hoo I'm giving writing a brake ...

I agree.... is all I can say lol. thanks

You've become my new obsession My part time fantasy In every dream my hands around your neck The knife embedded in my back The acid tears of denial dissolving my ...

I don't really know many of you ( sorry) but tara you seem really nice from what I've read and you were nice about my picture :)!

Thank you :)! I really do enjoy reading you comments! Wu

Thank you all very much for your comments on my poem I will now make some adjustments! love wu x

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