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Re: Post your own Pic thread
erm I though I'd post more pic as I'm bored! Ok here's alot of photos :)!! This is me and my friend holly ( posing :) ) Kate and amie ...
Feb 18, 2005 -
Re: [ Lingering ]
-yay- does that mean it was ok??? I shall try change the first two line *thinks* any one got any suggestions? No time left for prayers No one will answer ...
Feb 18, 2005 -
Re: Post your own Pic thread
soy - doesn't it bother your gf or bf that you're seeing another person...?
Feb 17, 2005 -
Re: [ Lingering ]
I'm not sure on this at all but hey, I'm not sure if this is the right section for it either. Please give me your comments etc! The same old ...
Feb 17, 2005 -
Re: Series of Sad Stuff
Eep, darn school hey you never know may help you!
Feb 17, 2005 -
Re: hurt me, hurt me
Really love this wonderful imagery wonderful words however I agree with niteowl about the title I though 'oh no its going to be boring' I'm not really sure what you ...
Feb 17, 2005 -
Re: my lil' intro
This was great, the way the words flowed with each other the feelings you get as you read, however there was one little bit I didn't like... Flying free, flowing ...
Feb 17, 2005 -
Re: dead man on the floor
wow... its pretty much all I can say I agree with the above ths has to be one of your best pieces and as they said to it's simple yet ...
Feb 17, 2005 -
Re: Keeping Up, rewrite, etc...
I understood it though I may have got it wrong - and I did really like it... I'm no good at saying what to change on your poems, sorry. Wu
Feb 17, 2005 -
Re: The "Jack has 1000 posts party". Drinks on me.
Well done jack *passes him a cow to celebrate* May I have a Jd and coke please I'm dying for one *sits in the corner and watchs* wu
Feb 16, 2005 -
Re: I Can See
I really didn't let this it was boring and repetative it has nothing to it, there was not a line the would catch my attention sorry. It just seemed as ...
Feb 16, 2005 -
Re: Series of Sad Stuff
I don't even know you I know the story of your sadness but through these poems I could read your despair and it began to hurt me, I can't comment ...
Feb 15, 2005 -
Re: Happy Valentines Day!
Ah valentines day is over it was a nice thing to do zzap even if it was to be more popular or whatever you had your heart in the right ...
Feb 15, 2005 -
Re: [Needs a good title...]
Yeah i'm with you on that one, I jsut thought I'd give a different style a go 'cause every one says I do the same kind of style and its ...
Feb 14, 2005 -
Re: Girl, 10, Cuffed for Scissors in School
That's really wrong she was just a little kid! Its to extreme I take scissors to school... its a part out our equipment! wu
Feb 13, 2005
