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Re: Your choice...
Whispered goodbyes Unanswered questions The hope inside of me ready to kick in Covering my heart up numbing my pain It tells me he’ll love me by Monday So many ...
Feb 14, 2006 -
Re: Rock On!!!!
ooooh :) errrm Coldplay, Alkaline trio, madness, stereophonics, muse, strokes, franz, the magic numbers, the ordinary boys, the speicals, mad caddies, the kinks, foo fighters, the clash damein rice, d
Jun 18, 2005 -
Re: Battle of the Bands
RHCP vs finch
Mar 31, 2005 -
Re: another cyber relationship
It's been a long time since I've come here and your peom caught my heart straight away this makes me muchly happy :) restores my faith in poetry! your eyes ...
Mar 26, 2005 -
Re: prayer
To be fair this poem didn't capture me like the rest of your poems maybe it was it just to plain maybe I expect a little more from you. Yes ...
Mar 13, 2005 -
Re: If...
1. If you were to be granted one wish, what would it be? Oh this is tres hard theres so many things. Well I'd wish for having wishes forever but ...
Mar 13, 2005 -
Re: No Words Can Describe
This was a really beautiful poems the words flowing wonderfully I love it when the first line catches me as yours did and to the end it kept me mesmerised ...
Mar 6, 2005 -
Re: You want to speak the truth
Not a great poem, I'm afraid. The lay out was terrible it made it harder for the reader to read, which is highly important of course, not only that when ...
Mar 6, 2005 -
Re: I'm board. If your board, come here. NOW.
I feeeeeel sick I've eaten to much THAI - just been out for a meal avec family hehe almost died eating an orange *giggles* meh Ithink I shall fall a ...
Mar 5, 2005 -
Re: attempt at universality (you may now laugh)
wow - yet another amazing poem, your last few have bored me slighlty - not to be mean but this is totally different, the flowing words, different images I can ...
Mar 4, 2005 -
Re: I Drive Too Much...
I really loved it you're such a great writer you seem to catch me from the start till the end :) - I am short of time so I can't ...
Mar 4, 2005 -
Re: Still driving, not drunk (anymore), and this is a rewrite
A million times better really it is :)! This begining is wonderful really captured me this time. Music slides out from under my brother’s door I love this it's such ...
Feb 27, 2005 -
Re: Opening the Door and Inviting Him In
The poem seemed very dull nothing to it, I'm sure it could have been wonderful and you have the right ideas but its just so repatative - and I know ...
Feb 27, 2005 -
Re: SHOUT
This poem threw me there isn't any other poems like this on here! At first I though no I don't like the 'SHOUUUUT' but I begin to warm to the ...
Feb 27, 2005 -
Re: dance beats and dark streets
I see it kind of now, but no it wasn't very obvious but thats good in some respect it gets you thinking about the poem. wu
Feb 27, 2005
