WrittenSoul

I know this is uber short, but it only ever came about because I had to look at a picture and write a story/description about it. (This was a couple ...

I like it, but the beginning is pretty confusing-at least to me. I think you need to slow down and describe more, because it seems like you're just jumping from ...

Wow, that's really good. I liked how you ended it with the little cliffhanger. It makes me want to keep reading, which is always a good thing. I also liked ...