WrittenSoul

Debating aside, can I direct any one's attention to the fact that Paolini first said that his books were going to be a trilogy ? Needless to say, a trilogy ...

thought of creating a super wolf who.....would destroy the loony in the jeep except...

Pirates!

There is an ending and a beginning to every story, and sadly for you this is only the beginning as there is a middle after it and even farther ahead ...

Hey there, Cat! That was pretty good, but there were a few things I have to complain about. I'm warning you now, I'm picky with stuff, but you have a ...

Well, I read through the whole thing, and more than once I might add. It was superbly written-maybe even your best one yet! I agree with Angel, and I can't ...

That was really good! I'm trying to find errors, but it's really hard to find anything-which is good, because that means you didn't make any easily noticed mistakes, if any! ...

Hey! I'm 15 (I'll be 16 in a month and 4 days haha), and I just realized I never (at least, I think) ever introduced myself to you guys. Well, ...

Thanks so much for the support! I am going to write more when I get around to it, though I'm currently writing about three other things that I haven't put ...

Actually, the name in Lord of the Rings is Moria....I think...lol Anyway, that sounded pretty good. I can't wait to see what happens in the future-your story caught me and ...

First off: Welcome! Second: Congrats! That was a very good piece of work, very nicely done. I have just one problem, but I don't think it'll be that hard to ...

I think you should go for the second one. It draws you in more than the first one-which is a good thing. It makes me want to keep reading, to ...

The Book of Shadows-Prologue She watched the glint of the knife as it fell with a clang from his grasp. She struggled uselessly, her long, tangled, dark hair getting in ...

That was very good. I only have a couple of problems. First: Slipping like bare feet on ice, is the hot liquid falling down his throat. It doesn't sound like ...

I liked it, but I have to agree with Loose and Patience about the 'rotteness' part. It seems like it doesn't flow with the story, so maybe try changing it ...