WritingWolf

Thank you. :) I see how the point could be confusing to you. I'll think about that when revising this. But it's not that high on my list of things ...

Thank you. What you've said here will be very useful. But I feel like you never made your point about me sometimes rhyming. I understand what you're saying, but it ...

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Thank you for the wonderful review! Although I will say, the reason it wasn't very descriptive was because I was in such a big hurry(this was for a contest). But ...

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Thank you do much for taking the time to read my work. :D When/if(I probably will but I'm not sure if I'll have time) I edit it I will definitely ...

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Thank you so much for the review! The one thing I don't under stand about what you said is how can the first thing you quoted not be true when ...

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Thanks for pointing out my grammar/spelling mistakes. I'm really bad at both. As for what type of animals the mweors are, I'm sorry I couldn't really explain them more but ...

Thank you so much for taking the time to point out all of those grammar and spelling mistakes. :) (And just so you know if you read the first chapter ...

Thank yous o much for the review. I already knew I had a lot of spelling mistakes(I really suck at spelling), I just don't have the time to find them. ...

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This was really lovely, I like it a lot. :) Good job. :D

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