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Re: late night poetry from my trusty notebook
Congratulations! You made it!
May 3, 2016 -
Re: the (non) master of my own (sham) destiny
Congrats on completing NaPo! You rock!
May 3, 2016 -
Re: to skip stones on the ocean: NaPo 2016
Congratulations on completing NaPo!
May 3, 2016 -
Re: Poetry Turds
Congratulations on completing NaPo! You did awesome!
Apr 30, 2016 -
Re: turning through the years
Great job! You made it! Woohoo :D
Apr 30, 2016 -
Re: first time's a charm
Congratulations on making it through NaPo! You rock!
Apr 30, 2016 -
Re: the tail-end of disaster
Congratulations! Not only did you finish NaPo, but you have some really great poems in there! :D Woohoo!
Apr 30, 2016 -
Re: Of Lightning and Lightning Bugs (NaPo 2016)
30/30 Dancing From the twitch of your arm, to the width of your steps, from where your eyes wander, to how you follow the beat, dancing tells all.
Apr 30, 2016 -
Re: Of Lightning and Lightning Bugs (NaPo 2016)
29/30 The Goal Learning to write is like learning to see the world in a different hue. It's seeing the light reflected in the window instead of seeing a full ...
Apr 30, 2016 -
Re: Hello!
Welcome to YWS! If feedback is what you're looking for then I'm sure you'll fit in here perfectly. :) If you need help with anything around the site just send ...
Apr 30, 2016 -
Re: Of Lightning and Lightning Bugs (NaPo 2016)
28/30 The Formal The lighting is dim, the color changing. There are wooden walls and white table cloths. The music fills the room not loud enough to hurt but it ...
Apr 30, 2016 -
Re: Ratings confuse me, help
I think Lareine and ChildOfNowhere summed it up pretty well, but because I grew up in a slightly more sheltered environment then most teens I'm going to drop my thoughts ...
Apr 30, 2016 -
Re: Of Lightning and Lightning Bugs (NaPo 2016)
27/30 Ghosts I can hear the echo of laughter from long ago. I can see the fallen bricks of an old house I rather miss. I can feel your fingerprints ...
Apr 27, 2016 -
Re: Attempt the Thrid
I've been reading through some of your poetry and I thought I'd drop in a few comments. (note, I haven't read them all) You're really good at conveying different feelings ...
Apr 27, 2016 -
Re: Of Lightning and Lightning Bugs (NaPo 2016)
26/30 Old Soul What does it mean to have an old soul? Because that is what I've been called so many times. I think it means to see the truth. ...
Apr 27, 2016
